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     For a small assignment in my english class, we were supposed to take a good quality tour video of GDCI using the iPads. The video that I took of a tour of GDCI was very poorly done. In the video, I noticed that it was blurry at times, there was a lot of movement in the video, it was very choppy and shaky from walking around, and there was a lot of background noise. Also, the video was not entertaining and was very boring to watch. The start of the video was not intreging and would not hook any viewers to continue to watch it. During the video it made the tour of the school confusing and did not show some of the important areas of the school like the cafeteria, gym, and the cc lab. If I were to redo this video I would hold the iPad very still and not rotate the iPad from landscape to portrait. This would improve the shakiness and choppiness of the video. Another element that I would add into the video is entertainment. I would like to make the video more intriguing and entertaining to watch. Lastly, I would make sure that I included all the important areas of the school in the video. This is what the flaws were in my video, and some things that I would improve on in any future videos I had to make using the iPads. 

Example piece of my video 

In this video you can tell there is a lot of shakiness, choppiness and background noise.